magic box
When I had my turn i felt.Then I said remote!” Then miss ashely ask me to describe it and I said the buttons are bumpy,soft,smooth,hard,made of plastic,round buttons,and square buttons.
When I finished my turn her was other students that had her turn .When they had turn they said that the magic box was very heavy.Because miss ashley made it out of cardboard and her was other things touch,smell and feel and also eat.
Theres and hole inside of it and that's the bit that is when you have to put your hand inside of it but miss ashley has to put on a blindfold on our eyes.
I think it was fun because that when i had my turn it was so amazing.
id I remember to include….
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yes
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Title
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yes
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Introduction
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yes
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Who, what, when, where, why, who, how
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yes
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3 paragraphs - burger model
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yes
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Conclusion - my own thinking/reflection
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yes
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Specific adjectives
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yes
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Simile/Metaphor
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yes
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Different punctuation
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yes
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Short sentence for effect
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yes
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Correct spelling throughout the story
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yes
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A sentence you have added in editing
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yes
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A sentence you have moved in editing
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yes
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Sentence starters given
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