I am a Year 7 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teacher is Mrs Yandall.
Friday 31 March 2017
Monday 27 March 2017
WALT mark our writing against a rubric
Line basketball
On Monday we had skatebaording but they cancelled it so the teachers think about it and they decided it to play a different thing to do.
And they said line basketball we meeted at the bottom courts and we started and we lined up behind the yellow line and Miss Ashley said to go boy girl boy girl and we started the game.
When I went I was sweating on my face. we were cheering for Room 7 then the game ended and we went up to class.
On Monday we had skatebaording but they cancelled it so the teachers think about it and they decided it to play a different thing to do.
And they said line basketball we meeted at the bottom courts and we started and we lined up behind the yellow line and Miss Ashley said to go boy girl boy girl and we started the game.
When I went I was sweating on my face. we were cheering for Room 7 then the game ended and we went up to class.
Marking my story!
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Ideas
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Structure and Language
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Organisation
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Vocabulary
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Sentence Structure
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Spelling
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Punctuation
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R3
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R2
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R4
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R3
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R2
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R3
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R2
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Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
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2B |
Thursday 23 March 2017
Tuesday 21 March 2017
AMETI map
i use this map for go places and stuff like that.I live far away from tamaki primary school.
Monday 20 March 2017
WALT navigate websites to find information
my name is Suave we learnt about Ameti and that the Ameti is close to the pamure station and Reeves rd also botany and the last one pakuranga if people go fast theres lights for people to slow down in there cars in pamure and other places,companies,and community's.
Friday 17 March 2017
Suave magic box
magic box
When I had my turn i felt.Then I said remote!” Then miss ashely ask me to describe it and I said the buttons are bumpy,soft,smooth,hard,made of plastic,round buttons,and square buttons.
When I finished my turn her was other students that had her turn .When they had turn they said that the magic box was very heavy.Because miss ashley made it out of cardboard and her was other things touch,smell and feel and also eat.
Theres and hole inside of it and that's the bit that is when you have to put your hand inside of it but miss ashley has to put on a blindfold on our eyes.
I think it was fun because that when i had my turn it was so amazing.
id I remember to include….
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yes
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Title
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yes
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Introduction
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yes
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Who, what, when, where, why, who, how
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yes
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3 paragraphs - burger model
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yes
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Conclusion - my own thinking/reflection
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yes
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Specific adjectives
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yes
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Simile/Metaphor
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yes
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Different punctuation
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yes
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Short sentence for effect
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yes
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Correct spelling throughout the story
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yes
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A sentence you have added in editing
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yes
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A sentence you have moved in editing
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yes
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Sentence starters given
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Friday 10 March 2017
Thursday 9 March 2017
I am learning to use pictures and diagrams in the story to help me understand the meaning
I will be successful if I can talk about the pictures and diagrams in the story and say how they help me understand the words
In the box on the right, write any ideas you have about the picture on the left. Remember everything we talked about when we read the story together.
Think - what does this picture tell me?
This pictures tells me..It looks like a big hole.
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This pictures tells me.. It telling me that the Rubbish is piling up.
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This pictures tells me..it It tells me that more Rubbish are piling more so the put sour.
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This pictures tells me..it tells that the methane gas spreads around the hole city.
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This pictures tells me..this picture tells me that if water,snow goes on trash it starts to trickle down brake.
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This pictures tells me..It tells me that the Rubbish mase in to leachaid.
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This pictures tells me..this picture tells me that if iny toolkit thing goes in the rubbish it starts to crumble inside.
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This pictures tells me..this picture tells me that this people put in a pipe and the pipe sucks up all of the toolkit material .
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This pictures tells me..It tells me that it only some guse come out of it.
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This pictures tells me..this picture tells me that some toolkits metarail burn holes in the ground.
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Friday 3 March 2017
Wednesday 1 March 2017
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