On Monday we had skatebaording but they cancelled it so the teachers think about it and they decided it to play a different thing to do.
And they said line basketball we meeted at the bottom courts and we started and we lined up behind the yellow line and Miss Ashley said to go boy girl boy girl and we started the game.
When I went I was sweating on my face. we were cheering for Room 7 then the game ended and we went up to class.
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