Monday, 27 March 2017

WALT mark our writing against a rubric

Line basketball

On Monday we had skatebaording but they cancelled it so the teachers think about it and they decided it to play a different thing to do. 

And they said line basketball we meeted at the bottom courts and we started and we lined up behind the yellow line and Miss Ashley said to go boy girl boy girl and we started the game.

When I went I was sweating on my face. we were cheering for Room 7 then the game ended and we went up to class.

Marking my story!
Ideas
Structure and Language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Punctuation
R3
R2
R4
R3
R2
R3
R2
Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
 19
My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)
 2B

1 comment:

  1. Next steps -
    add more detail
    use dialogue, people talking
    use punctuation ! ? ""

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